veangance quest

by pucky18

Tags: Serious, War

Description

you are a silk merchant in the city of Asderat in the country of Sveinan. this country is at war with the country of Dharix. the people of Dharix have a new weapon, a horrifying undead superwarrior. the superwarrior attacks, and everyone you know is dead. pilfering a sword from the wreckage of a mysterious building, you set out for revenge.

Stats

(on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 4 - need to be accompanied by an adult
Story Difficulty: 3 - trek through the forest
Play Length: 4 - A well spent lunch break
Player Rating: 3 - choose your own boredom (based on 35 ratings)
My Rating: you have not yet rated this game
Played 174 times and finished 42 times since 11/21/2006

Comments

You have a pretty good storyline here, but you have a lot of editing issues to work on; you don't need to write This is a new page. And add some detail and description to spice it up.

-- SoarHighBeFree
12/18/2011 3:41:41 AM:

no pictures no real like development of characters

-- DarkentityOni
10/29/2011 11:19:34 PM:

This story is so fresh! each page is a new page! There need to be more stories this new and inavative. in all reality though, it isnt that bad.

-- ugilick
8/4/2011 1:35:22 PM:

THIS IS A NEW PAGE. THIS IS A NEW PAGE. THIS IS A NEW PAGE. Done.

-- RiterOfWrandom
7/10/2011 9:47:41 PM:

Needs more. I agree with the other comments.

-- Killer999
6/8/2011 11:57:56 AM:

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