The Machine

by bradhal

Tags: Serious, War

Description

It's 2011 1st of March. It's a seemingly normal day except for something, which is unknown and unusual, and completely out of place. The Machine. What does it do? How does it work? What will you do with it? You Decide!

Produced by me bradhal and it's my first story game. I think its very good considering.

Stats

(on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 4 - need to be accompanied by an adult
Story Difficulty: 5 - run through the jungle
Play Length: 5 - Not going to lose any sleep
Player Rating: 5 - not the best, certainly not the worst (based on 27 ratings)
My Rating: you have not yet rated this game
Played 381 times and finished 72 times since 2/26/2011

Comments

Brilliant. I was hooked from the start- this guy should write a science fiction book. Well done

-- Falcon25263
4/6/2012 5:32:16 PM:

This was weird. Also you rated my game a 1 so I'm angry.

-- stegythedinosaur
3/20/2012 7:59:22 PM:

-- betaband
3/3/2012 12:16:30 PM:

Pretty good for the first attempt.

-- Killer999
5/25/2011 11:15:13 AM:

The writing could definitely use some work, but overall good, especially for first effort. It's clear you put some time into creating a story.
Personal preference: I don't like reading solid blocks of text. Please at least use paragraph breaks for dialogue.

-- Sethaniel
5/6/2011 10:14:44 AM:

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