The Devil's Fire

by Ashen_Snake

Tags: Serious

Description

EDITS: unpublished for a moment to fix some missing pages.

The Devil's Act - an event in history carried out by one man that obliterated three entire states. Bana-Jxo has been leading a rather undercover life after what he'd done, but when the government starts sending out his own kind to kill him, he gets into a crux that uncovers just when all went wrong. Now, Bana must figure out the secrets of the Zempaph people, and protect newly found comrades in the process...

"The first rule to remember, Julian, is that pain is a gift to lead to a better tommorrow... A bittersweet gift, but still a gift."

Stats

(on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 5 - aren't you a little to old to be trick or treating
Story Difficulty: 4 - march in the swamp
Play Length: 7 - It keeps going and going
Player Rating: 7 - even better than Reeses' Cups® (based on 49 ratings)
My Rating: you have not yet rated this game
Played times and finished times since (N/A - Not Published)

Comments

I stayed up two hours past when I should have gone to bed, but it was worth it. I really enjoyed this story, and I felt like I have, in a way, bonded with the main character. Great job.

-- jkulibert2 (Score of 0)
4/21/2011 11:55:05 PM:

That. Was. Amazing. You have very poetic style of writing!

-- someone (Score of 0)
3/21/2011 8:13:00 PM:

Again, awesome game. I liked how you're not sure wether he lived or not in the end.
You should have made it longer, though--much, much longer.

-- We Will Murder You (Score of 0)
2/26/2011 6:28:15 PM:

Awesome!!! It was really fun. I'm definitely going to want the book when it comes out.
I think you should do another story in the same world--kind of like Necromancer and Death Song by EndMaster.
How come you can't use the magazine item though? I'd really like to read it.

-- We Will Murder You (Score of 0)
2/20/2011 8:55:16 PM:

best story I've read so far, 10/10

-- yourname (Score of 0)
2/6/2011 9:58:45 PM:

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