Runaway

by heeheeAHAHA

Tags: Serious

Description

You are in a small peasant village. You know nothing of the outside world. Your goal in life is to eat, sleep, and not get punished by the cruel soldiers. What are you going to do when soldiers come after you and you are given the chance of a lifetime to escape and maybe find freedom and a new life?

---------------------Author's notes--------------------

Some of the pages you'll die instantly unless you use a specific item. To get certain items, you have to get to a certain page. I'll give you an example: If you make it out of the forest, this guy will try to kill you. There is only one way to kill him, but you need a specific item you would've found in the forest.

Heeheeahahah and I-fergie14233- have worked hard on this, so we hope you enjoy this. It has been hard, but worth it because personally, I believe this is a magnificent piece of work, showing determination, love, and trust can bring you riches....along with some help from friends.

Finally, have fun with this!

Stats

(on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 4 - need to be accompanied by an adult
Story Difficulty: 4 - march in the swamp
Play Length: 5 - Not going to lose any sleep
Player Rating: 4 - slightly more fun than homework (based on 30 ratings)
My Rating: you have not yet rated this game
Played 347 times and finished 44 times since 2/19/2011

Comments

Loved it! I feel so sorry for Jared though. But I have a couple of problems like a page didn't work and how come that guy was hitting me in the beginning, and how come no one stopped him from doing so?

-- SEULaw (Score of 150)
3/5/2012 11:26:36 PM:

little boring.

-- Killer999 (Score of 30)
10/5/2011 9:47:27 AM:

It was a decent story. I noticed a few errors, like "This time,you promise myself" and occasionally you would forget quotation marks. 4/8

-- ThisisBo (Score of 10)
7/15/2011 8:28:12 PM:

Not bad, confusing at times, but an okay effort. 4/8

-- RiterOfWrandom (Score of 10)
7/7/2011 11:34:22 AM:

I plan on checking out your other games, which you seemed more proud of. In truth, I think this one needs a good bit of revision. Mainly, I think it needs more context. Why are the solders beating you in the beginning? Are you a criminal? Framed? A rebel against a tyrannical regime? There were some pages with no links (such as the "Try to find a new source of food" page). Also, it didn't seem like there were many tactical decisions to make. Most of the solders were killed off in the same page so it almost felt rushed. Stories usually feel more interesting when there is more of a challenge to evading or defeating each specific opponent as opposed to dismissively killing them off.

Sorry, I know you asked me to read this and I don't want to insult your work, but I think you could do a lot better so I'm being honest. My own work has some plot holes that were noticed by others.

-- jlwelch (Score of 10)
5/8/2011 4:52:47 PM:

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