Escape From The Wild Tobe! Part 1

by MissGlambert

Tags: Based Off A True Story, Humor, Part of Series

Description

You are being chased by a vicious wild Tobe.
Escape!

Stats

(on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 3 - must be at least this tall to play
Story Difficulty: 2 - walk in the park
Play Length: 2 - So short yo' momma thought it was a recipe
Player Rating: 3 - choose your own boredom (based on 11 ratings)
My Rating: you have not yet rated this game
Played 59 times and finished 14 times since 10/30/2011

Comments

Grammar's off, I have no idea what a Wild Tobe is, and there was this one part where you say 'run as hard as you can' I don't think that's possible. You can run as fast as you can, but not hard as you can.

-- fergie14233
1/29/2012 9:27:18 PM:

This is a good start, but there are a couple things that I'm a little iffy on. Firstly, the grammar is a little confusing. Perhaps have a beta reader check your work? Secondly, some of the acts seem completely random. That's okay, but without details, it's a bit confusing.

-- Resthera
11/22/2011 2:35:28 PM:

That... was horrible

-- ThisisBo
11/5/2011 12:35:53 PM:

terrable. read some of the other stories on here to get the gist of what people are looking for. this isn't a story. it can barely fit into a pamphlet. this is the worst story i have ever read. sorry for being harsh, but you can't just make a story without any characters, plot, details, or setting.

-- alienalpha
11/2/2011 11:55:06 PM:

Not the best work I've seen.

-- Killer999
11/1/2011 9:52:22 AM:

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