Logo
 Home Storygames Random Search Forums My Stuff Help & Info Logon

Stories > Fan Fiction > Albus Potter:The next Generation Year 1

Tags: Humor, Serious

Description

There is spoilers. If you haven't finished the book do not play. But It's your choice.


It's Albus Potter, and well no one can actually say what this first year can do. He is Harry Potter's son. The world of witches and wizards are safe for now. But for how long. Enter the story of Albus Potter.

Stats

 (on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 3 - must be at least this tall to play
Story Difficulty: 3 - trek through the forest
Play Length: 6 - It'll be a while, better grab a Snickers®
Player Rating: 4 - slightly more fun than homework (based on 45 ratings)
My Rating: you have not yet rated this game
Played 525 times and finished 39 times since 9/17/2007

Comments

I liked this a lot. I miss reading Harry Potter. I would love to see a sequel :)
-- Charlotte (Score of 0)
2/4/2012 4:07:13 AM:
This is terrible. Everyone knows Draco and Harry weren't on the worst terms after the war- even starting something that resembled a friendship. Also, why make Albus a Gary-Stu and Scorpius the weak pathetic bad guy. One more thing, the ending was staged. No matter which of the three choices you selected, you won. I don't think you can recite the same spell three different ways and still get the desired effect.
-- JKR Fan (Score of 0)
1/16/2012 4:39:08 PM:
Where to start... I can tell that there was effort put into this game in the beginning, but as the story progressed it seemed to get more rushed and less interesting. The plot was predictable and boring; the poor grammar and sentence structure made it difficult to understand which dialogue belonged to which character. The endings were the most anti-climactic of any choose your own story that I've read. With that said, I did finish the story, which should count for something.
-- raptor7 (Score of 0)
10/14/2011 10:51:05 PM:
if your planning on making another one, make it more longer and make the twist harder to figure out. other than that it'll be awesome!
-- terf42 (Score of 0)
7/4/2011 6:01:59 AM:
big fan of the books you did good but the next one has to have a more fullfilling story line
-- trevor (Score of 0)
5/27/2011 7:37:35 PM:

[17 More Comments]