A Trip to the Zoo

by andrzejsobczak31

Tags: Humor

Description

You are an average civilian with an urge to go to the zoo. You seem to encounter some weird events because you needed a car. Your goal intentionally was to go to the zoo but you end up forgetting about in the midst of the crazy happenings.

Stats

(on a scale of 1 to 8)

Maturity Level: 7 - anything goes
Story Difficulty: 8 - mosie through a minefield
Play Length: 4 - A well spent lunch break
Player Rating: 2 - good ... for you to poop on (based on 14 ratings)
My Rating: you have not yet rated this game
Played 128 times and finished 16 times since 9/26/2011

Comments

Random, seems very forced, not written very well, and I don't even go to the zoo?

-- fergie14233
3/15/2012 12:45:47 PM:

Theres no way to get to the zoo, and there are too many " You Died" endings.

-- awesomeness1242
2/28/2012 6:35:59 PM:

It was... creative, but I never made it to the zoo :P. Also, your grammar was pretty bad, which makes your story look that much more juvenile, which is something you want to avoid. Even if your 2cnd person view takes place in the head of an extremely immature person, you want the PERSON to look juvenile, not the STORY. I also think you made 13 guest accounts and rated it a 6, I don't think it's deserving of that rating at all, and I doubt many other readers would either due to the comments I've seen. 3/8

-- ThisisBo
10/15/2011 5:05:23 PM:

I never made it to the zoo... This was entertaining enough, even if a bit pointless. It wasn't the worst I've played. Silly, but at least it was doable.

-- raptor7
10/15/2011 12:10:22 AM:

weird, too neg and i thought one ending would be the zoo?

-- DarkentityOni
9/29/2011 10:20:44 PM:

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