Very nice! Well written, interesting story. Great use of the choices with the characters- better alternative to using "you" everywhere. I -must- buy the ebook for the rest!
Hi guys! The final, edited version of the book, has been published, and is available for purchase! This web playable demo is not the most recent version of the book. Spelling and grammar errors have been corrected by my editor since then, however, the story remains unchanged, so this demo gives a good idea of how the book goes. Thanks for reading it :) - Paul Turner
-- tsmpaul (Score of 0)
7/7/2007 7:10:09 AM:
I was a bit skeptical at first, because of all the similarities to Star Trek, but by the time I reached the cliffhanger I was intrigued. How will the Ulysses' crew solve the mystery and avoid antagonizing the Cassians? Very good.
I think the story idea is strong; the overall concept is OK; the writing could use the tender ministrations of a pro or semi-pro editor, for grammar and succintness.
I'm looking forward to purchasing a copy when its ready.
-- Cal (Score of 0)
4/27/2007 6:28:24 AM:
Excellent story telling. Fast pace action, quick thinking fun. Great job!!!
Awesome! 7/8! just make it a bit longer, with more fighting.
-- Rommel (Score of 0)
3/9/2007 11:40:38 PM:
Alright I played the game and went through all it's options and loved it. At first I thought the story was guided but then realized that there were different options and it was not always a happy ending. In fact different ends which I love. Great game and well written.... I'm looking forward to the actual books.
Absolutely excellent story with nicely branching paths that lead to different events. I noticed no problems with tenses. I'm not sure what you could change to make this better - it's great how it is. Nice pictures, too.
Wonderful, wonderful game! This is yet another game that I must add to my list of favorite games! I have to say, great storyline, great writing, and amazing ideas! Great job! 8/8
Best storygame on this whole site. Seriously, stuff the website, publish it as a book. CYOA or not, this is/would be the best story/storygame I've ever read. Awesome work. I'd buy it if it was a book.
partial victory!!! sweet. nice game. i recommend this game for featuring. seriously. great writing. i would only bring up, i dont like the "page numbers" on the top of each page. some people do though, so its your choice.